Reflections of Rejected Queries
As I’ve done more and more research of this insane industry that is publishing, I’ve discovered, quite by accident, that I’ve done pretty much everything people suggest. I can’t recall where I read it but there is this quote I like. The only difference between a writer and a published writer is persistence, or something close to that. This is seen nowhere more than in the arts. So many writers spend their whole lives hoping what they have to say will be worth reading by others. That, of course, requires talent, agents, publishers, an audience, etc, etc.
It could be said that I’m on the “right path” to publishing a book. That could mean nothing of course, but if you look at the writer checklist (didn’t know there was one? Muahaha welcome to the crazy) then the argument could be made that if I stick with it I’m bound to sell a book. Let’s examine then, shall we?
1. Write a book – Indeed, this is an important step toward publishing. You could add plotting, creating characters, and all that if you’d like, but this is more or less the start. You have a finished book, what to do with it? This was the first thing I got right. Woo!
2. Set aside said book – My book was terrible. I loved it, don’t get me wrong, it was a great feeling to read it. But it was terrible and I put it away in a folder (where it’s still sitting). Hurray, I completed step two.
3. Writer another book using skills learned the first time – I happened to have another story to tell. You know, it was one of those “What a GREAT idea!” moments. Well skipping all the juicy bits, I wrote another book. I was on the right track and didn’t even know it at the time.
4. Edit, edit, edit, then get someone better to edit – I have the supreme pleasure, and the slight terror, of having a wife that is far better at editing than I am. After 4 drafts there was no page of my manuscript that didn’t have marks from top to bottom. You don’t need to research publishing to guess this step is important!
5. Discriminate against agents and test the waters – Yup, you heard me. Choose your top 10 agents then send your query to 5 others. Or better yet, attend a conference and try those agents first (which is what I did). You keep your top 10 list, you’ll see why in a second.
Send out those first 5 queries, wait patiently for your rejections, and hope for some tidbits as to why. My responses were dead on (that’s why they’re agents). “The prose is good and you do a fine job setting the scene (always take the compliments where you get them!), but I felt a bit removed from your main character, Colby.” That’s a direct quote from one, the others said the same, but not as clear. One good, detailed response out of 5 is GOOD luck. Now you know what’s missing and you know what these agent’s were looking for. Fix these things, then fix up your query to show other agents that you’re strong in that area (note: that’s show NOT tell). Most agents want at least a few pages. Make them stronger.
6. Write another book and keep submitting – Here is where you wait, and show your persistence. Almost every single published author has stories of rejections. Your book very well may not find an agent. Maybe the market isn’t ready for it. Maybe it’s not very good. Maybe you just aren’t ready for it. Write because you want to tell stories and each book you write will be better than the last. Patience and Persistence.
What do you think, agree or disagree? I’ve found it to be pretty accurate in the fantasy genre.





February 20th, 2010 at 5:06 am
Good post Robert, and I found similarities to the world of visual art. As someone who has had a fair share of rejections, I decided to make my art for myself and anyone else who is interested and just let the rest happen.
The enjoyment I get from the creative process is priceless. Art for art’s sake.
Constructive criticism from those who have rejected your work can be helpful, but don’t lose sight of your own voice in the process. There are many successful artists and writers out there who were rejected for the wrong reasons.
I like the theory that when we are ready for fame, the Universe will find us. Meanwhile, carry on and have fun sharing your gift.
February 20th, 2010 at 12:23 pm
That is exactly why I started my podcast on this site. I didn’t want my writing to be all about criticism by agents editors. My podcast is writing that is about what I love, and about growing as an artist. Thanks for your thoughts, Ann!
February 21st, 2010 at 11:26 am
Fantastic post, Robert! I just recently came to the precipice of querying my first book and decided to back off and take a couple months to revisit my craft and do another revision (based on feedback from betas and an agent, who requested 3 chapters after I won a contest). But when (not if) I return to the edge of querying, I will definitely be following this approach. Meanwhile, really enjoying writing my next book – and improving said craft along the way.
Keep up the persistence! It will pay off.
February 21st, 2010 at 12:14 pm
I’d held off querying these last months as well. I hadn’t sent one out since last August I think. In a way it was the rejection I got the other day that put me back INTO the mood. She gave me some really great advice (the quote I used in the post was from her email). Tuesday’s podcast I think will really show how much her words hit me. I’ve taken a whole new look at my characters and want to get far more into their thoughts, and not just their actions.
February 22nd, 2010 at 11:32 am
I think this list can be pretty much used in an art context too! I agree.. i think patience and persistence are key. oh and the ability to face rejection… sigh.
February 22nd, 2010 at 2:04 pm
I agree, it would probably apply to most of the arts. We tend to base our opinions of ourselves on what others think if we’re not careful. It’s a very unsympathetic job; you really do have to love it.