The first part of Mr. Snaggle’s Oddities. In this part, a young boy named Peter finds the old man living down the street from his house quite strange indeed. When the man opens a private circus tent, Peter’s friend makes sure they are the first to see it.
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Peter Morgan just didn’t trust old Mr. Snaggle. There was something strange about the man, even if he couldn’t put his finger on what exactly. Perhaps it was his circus, or that he lived in a giant green tent.
Peter tried to tell his friend his thoughts about the man, but Jackson wouldn’t listen. To him, it was all about the exotic animals. Nothing else mattered. That was how Peter found himself riding his bike to the opening of Mr. Snaggle’s twisted circus.
He’d passed by the place—which was not really up to circus standards by his estimation—often enough. Old Mr. Snaggle bought the large empty lot at the very end of the street, three blocks down from his own house, a couple weeks back. There was no house on the lot. Instead, Mr. Snaggle put up three large, colorful tents.
Peter had marveled over them when they first went up, but every day he passed by them they seemed more and more strange. It was his parents that pointed out the oddities. They wondered why anyone would want to live in a tent anyway, and how the man kept out intruders without any doors.
Jackson rode in front of him, making it impossible to talk during the short trip. His friend was just about bouncing off his seat he was so excited. Peter just tried to keep up. Lots of the kids around the neighborhood seemed happy about the largest of the three tents being opened for the first time today.
The colorful tents came into view as they circled around the final curve in the road. Strange or not, they were splendid. The smallest of the three was neon green. The others were purple and yellow. The yellow tent, the largest of them, was the circus tent.
Peter had been to a circus before, a proper circus, and that had been much bigger than all three tents combined. He didn’t see the big deal of this one, even if it was on their street. Really though, it wasn’t even that. He was excited at the prospect of the rare things they would see today. It just came back to there being something off about Mr. Snaggle himself.
His parents seemed to agree, it was all they had been talking about for days. He’d had to convince them to let him see the circus when it opened. They made him earn his own entrance fee, but Peter didn’t mind.
Approaching the tent, the boys left their bike’s locked to a tree and made their way toward the tent. Peter looked over the new sign above then entrance. It was done in colorful paint and had shapes and symbols all along the edges.
MR. SNAGGLE’S ODDITIES
Home to the Unnatural and Weird
Despite himself, Peter smiled. He had to admit that sounded like a place he’d enjoy.
“Come on, let’s go have a look.” Jackson said.
“Not so fast, kids.” Peter gulped at the words and turned to their source. Everybody in the neighborhood knew Billy’s voice. Billy was going on to high school this year and thought that gave him a right to pick on everyone smaller than him. It had been a rough summer with him around.
“We don’t want any trouble.” Peter said, frowning. The older boy had a friend with him. Peter got the feeling he knew where this was heading.
“I made a bet with Todd here, told him I thought we could get in for free today.” Billy said, ignoring his comment completely.
“That’s impossible,” Jackson countered, “the price is five dollars. It says right there on the sign.”
“That’s right. Dang, I guess I lose, Todd.” Billy smiled at his friend with a troubling grin. “Well, that’s a shame. We’ll just have to take your entry money then, I guess.”
Jackson paled a little at the realization. He turned to Peter with a look of defeat. They both knew better than to argue with the older boy. If they did, they’d lose their money anyway and probably get a black eye for their effort.
Reluctant, both boys pulled out the few dollars they had managed to earn with chores.
“And what do we have here?” The voice made Peter jump. It came from old Mr. Snaggle, sweeping out of his tent with a flourish of his cloak. The cloak was another of his strange habits. It was green and made of thick material. Peter thought it was great, but his parents both considered it very odd for a grown man. It seemed to fit a man who lived in bright tents to Peter.
Peter and Jackson, money in hand, stood dumbfounded. Neither had any idea what to do. It didn’t seem like a good idea to tell on the older kids. They would surely pay for it later if they did.
“We were just asking our friends if we could borrow the entry fee. We forgot our money at home, you see?” Billy explained, looking as innocent as possible.
“I see,” the old man repeated, eyeing them all at once it seemed. “Well that sounds good to me,” he said, pausing while Billy smiled. “Of course, that means these lads have enough to pay for all four of you, yes? Let’s see the money, and then I will show you things you’ve never imagined.”
Billy’s smile disappeared. Peter would have laughed had it been safe to do so, how was he going to answer without smiling? Billy saved him from having to find out.
“It doesn’t even matter. I didn’t want to see the stupid circus anyway. Come on, Todd. Let’s go sneak into a movie or something.” The two stalked away angrily.
Smiling widely, Peter looked up at Mr. Snaggle and said, “thank you.”
“Think nothing of it, my dear boy. And may I bid you welcome to my circus of oddities.” The old man flourished his cloak again, sweeping it out beside him as if to gesture toward the entrance. “For only five dollars, you can be the first to witness my collection of all things intriguing, baffling to scientists, thing unexplainable by experts all over the world. Enter, and see the impossible.”
Peter laughed in delight and his friend was clapping along with every word. The old man had a way of speaking that he’d never heard before. Why had he ever doubted coming to this place?
They both raised their hands to pay the man and he paused as if in thought. “In fact, for being my first visitors, why don’t you go ahead and keep your money. How does that sound? All I ask is that you tell other’s of what you see today, can you do that?”
Peter looked at his friend in wonder and they both nodded vigorously. To think they both now had five dollars! He turned to thank Mr. Snaggle again. In the back of his mind he remembered thinking there was something strange about the man. Then they went into the tent, and he forgot all about the things he’d been told.