Well I have more to talk about than I care to fit with a TNS post. So expect a lot more posts for a few days (minus Wednesday of course, that is my no-post day). This story was too much fun and I cannot wait to continue it. If you missed the voting post, #2 got the most votes. “An old retired hero returns home and brings danger at his heels.”
I couldn’t resist the temptation to have a Wheel of Time moment writing this piece. Not that it is a hero returning to Emond’s Field or anything, the story (so far) declares no specific world. But all the same I could just picture the village in the forest cut off from society so I ran with it. I doubt that the two with have anything similar beyond the quiet village aspect.
As always, I hope you enjoy the story.
Dedicated to the late Robert Jordan, who changed my writing forever.
“Home,” even as he whispered the word it didn’t feel right. How long had it been since he left, thirty years, forty? Braydon’s leather boots made no sound as he crossed the north bridge. After this long, his memory of every creak brought a smile to his lips. He walked with the stealth of a seasoned warrior. The fine blade hanging comfortably at his waist matched those steps.
It had been thirty-five years ago, crossing this same bridge, when the appeal of the outside world took over him. He wondered if any stories had made their way here over the years. When he left it had been night and nobody knew of his plans. Not even his closest friends, then again even they were never very close.
The Brookwine Inn was smaller than any he’d seen in a long time. Next to it was the Four Oaks Brewery, packed surely by the sounds traveling all the way to him, still hundreds of paces away. He thought again about the day of week, remembering to be Sunday, the day of rebirth. Of course, every Sunday would give the place great business. What was the last village he noted with only one main brewery? The thought brought a smile to his lips, a remembrance of simpler times.
As he approached the village it really came into view. He noticed the real changes then. Since the village only had one easy way to it there had been no way to tell before now. A large mountain loomed over the city from the north, and the river blocked any way to come from the east. It would be possible to arrive from the west, but not easily. The trees were cluttered so close that an average sized man would be shoulder to shoulder against them. That left the only logical path from the south, where the long, sturdy wooden bridge crossed the river at its slimmest width.
The new buildings stood far taller than any standing when he left. Some were even three stories tall! It was nothing to the cities he had seen with tall stone structures up to six stories or more, but this was far more than he expected here. It brought another large smile to the his lips. With everything that had happened to the world, the cities that had fallen to the various wars, the kingdom’s overtaken, this very stretch of land trading hands more than once, his hometown had thrived. It was such a proud thought.
Braydon noted the multiple towers scattered within the city. Archers were the heart of this village’s protection. He then noticed the passages carved into the mountain. Tall wooden platforms led to and between them, complete with rope pulleys for transport. It was a truly amazing sight. Mining made sense, but it was nice to see such technology coming this far from any major cities.
He tied his horse to one of the stands in front of the Four Oaks, still surprised by the fact that it seemed bigger than before. With a start he realized that it had been rebuilt, both buildings had. They were far larger than before, but appeared to be to scale with the originals. He noted twice the horse stands out front while tying up his mustang.
With each step more and more faces brought back distant memories of friends and family. Braydon scoured the crowds for the face of his father, wondering if he was still alive. He had just turned thirty when his little boy of only twelve vanished during the night. He laughed when he met his old man’s inquiring gaze. In an instant he saw the recognition. Tears filled the man’s weathered eyes.
With a firm voice Braydon spoke over the crowd. “Hello father,” was all he said. The room went silent for a time. Then at once the room seemed to burst with offers of drinks, people yelling his name, laughing about his strange clothes, tears, cheers and everything in between.
“Home,” the swordsman said quietly. It really didn’t feel so strange after all.